Tuesday, November 15, 2011

blow


fluttering
dancing

ah bitter-sweet lights
you make my day pensively bright


4 comments:

  1. smiles,
    love it.
    short and beautiful.

    make a contribution to poets rally today, any poem is welcome.

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  2. ah. love expressed in another venue!
    very keen awareness...how many (besides Billy Collins) will write of the small things, which all add up into the big things of Life?

    ‘‘bitter-sweet lights’‘ nice depiction
    ….so (thoughtfully) pensively bright. very meditative piece.
    what’s Not said, is said.

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  3. Bittersweet & lovely!

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